BETA Reading: Chapter One of "The Forgotten Swordsman"

Hello Everyone!

Thank you for taking part by being BETA readers for my book "The Forgotten Swordsman".

I have never had BETA or ARC readers before, and I admit I am new to the concept. I started publishing my work in 1992, and this particular project was originally written in 1997 and then revised in 2020-2021. I am currently revising it again, readying for publication and I crave feedback so that I can make improvements.

I am not familiar with how to organize BETA reading, so I apologize if my methods are unusual or unorthodox. This is my first time doing this.

I am going to start by asking: What do you think of the title "The Forgotten Swordsman"? What does it make you think of? Would you give the title a thumbs up or thumbs down? Why do you like it or dislike the title?

Next I have the first chapter, which you can read by visiting Google Docs at the following URL:

LINK FOR CHAPTER ONE OF "The Forgotten Swordsman"
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1rZ6LAK4-kxBDn7dLXm1NgmZZrndmp0VBPXx_N0krlO4/edit?usp=sharing

You can post comments and reactions via the Suggestion Mode on the Google Document, but I also have a number of questions that you can respond to via email. These questions are OPTIONAL. You don't have to answer them if you don't want to or don't have the time.

What do you think of the first chapter?

What do you like or dislike about it?

Do you want more descriptive details, less or do you feel it is the goldilocks amount already?

Having read it, would you want to keep reading or have you changed your mind?

I appreciate everyone's honest responses and both positive and negative feedback is useful to me in order to make improvements.

If you wish to discontinue / "unvolunteer" just let me know and there's no hard feelings. I have 3 jobs, 2 kids, a wife and leukemia, so I am fully aware of what it is like to be too busy and when life decides to get in the way.

If you wish to continue I can give you access to a larger section of the novel so that you can read and provide feedback.

Frequently Asked Questions

Are you available for a manuscript swap?

No, sorry. I don't have a lot of time available, but I do really appreciate everyone who volunteers to help out by being BETA readers and providing feedback so that I can make improvements to my work.

Are you willing to pay for BETA reading services?

No, sorry. Not interested. Thanks for your time however.

Is there a way that we BETA readers can discuss your work?

Sure, I recommend using Twitter/Threads/Instagam and the hashtags #ForgottenSwordsman and/or #CharlesMoffat to communicate with other readers.

Do you speak any Russian or Ukrainian?

Yes, actually I am currently learning both Russian and Ukrainian (and Romanian). I do a lot of research when writing my books, and learning the languages, the culture, the food, etc is part of how I immerse myself in the writing process.

Are you aware that there is currently a war going on in Ukraine?

Yes, I am very much aware of this. I am not writing my books in a vacuum. My writing is heavily influenced by historical events.

I saw you are also looking for ARC readers?

Yes, this is correct. I am also looking for ARC readers who can read the finished product when the book is finished and ready to publish. If you wish to be an ARC reader please let me know.

What is Peasant Magazine?

Peasant Magazine is a fantasy / historical fiction magazine that I run in my spare time that publishes short stories. It is published infrequently whenever I find the time. I use the email address peasantmagazine@gmail.com for the magazine correspondence and also for my writing career.

Do you have other books or short stories we can check out?

Yes, of course. You can download the free PDF versions of Peasant Magazine, which contain samples of my work and the work of other writers. You can find my other books at amazon.com/author/moffat. Some of my ebook short stories are also periodically free too.

If you have additional questions or comments feel free to do so.

Thank you everyone for your time and I look forward to reading your responses to my work!

Sincerely,
Charles Moffat
fiction.charlesmoffat.com

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